Cause and Effect Essay on Freedom Writers

The Freedom Writers

Just a few years ago students were separated in different classes based on their race. Today every student has to be tested so they could be put in a class level based on their scores, and everyone is treated equally. In The Freedom Writers, Students segregated themselves into racial groups in the classroom, and students were fighting all the time. Erin Gruwell is a new teacher that starts teaching at Woodrow Wilson high school; Erin discovers that all of her students are put in a low reading level. As she starts teaching them she gives every student a journal to write about anything they want. Erin inspires the students and gets each student to participate in class, and their whole life has changed with the education they have learned the years Erin taught them. Although students disengaged from education, the violence they face in the community, the loss of people they love, while the most important cause is the schools attitude toward the students.

The first cause is students are disengaged from education because of the violence they face every day in their community. Students get beaten up for no reason while they are just walking in the streets, trying to get somewhere. For example, when Eva was walking with her boyfriend and all of a sudden two Asian men get out of the car and began chasing Eva and her boyfriend, Eva ends up in a black territory, and gets jumped. This shows that everyone is violent within the neighborhood that Eva lives in, and that those people are dangerous. Also, an innocent person can get killed in a shooting while they are shopping for no reason. Paco takes out his gun and aims it at a black kid, but the black kid sees Paco with the gun so he ducks and runs; Sindy's boyfriend was shot instead. This situation shows that the kids are uneducated so they do whatever they feel is best and what they were taught. Therefore, students have faced violence everyday throughout their lives, and everyone uses violence because that's the way they were treated.

The second reason is the loss of people that are loved can have a great effect on the people that are related to them, and causes them to disengage from education. Some student parents were put into jail for something they didn't really do. Eva was waiting for her dad to take her to school on the front porch, while she was saying bye to her uncle and as soon as she looks at her doll she hears a shooting and her dad was blamed for it. This shows that the police can put innocent people in jail without even seeking to find the truth. Furthermore, many students lost more than one friend, some student have lost them while they were young. Marcus and his childhood friend found a gun and his friend suggested to practice with it but the next thing he notices that his friend had shot himself with a bullet in his back. This demonstrates that the students were not told what was wrong and what

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